CRIT AND FEEDBACK

 

ACTION PLANSUMMERY OF MY OWN OBSERVATION ON FEEBACK:This has been without a doubt one of the best and most productive crits I have ever had, and am really looking forward to the next ones coming up. I think that everything said was justified well and obvious within my work. It allowed me to put a finger on issues that I wasnt sure about and above all find solutions to imporving and making them better. I really need to focus down my idea's and visual experiements and stick to one. Here is what I need to be doing:* MAKE A CLEAR VISUAL DIRECTION:I need to focus on the most succesful and communicative approach which was the black and white approach I started to recently develop and to not fall into the circus usual theme  that might be to easy and common for audiences. The fact that I am aiming to focus on women in the circus I really wanted to develop something elegent and suffistiacted but at the same time go into another aspect of graphic designn which I usually stay away from and that is simplicity, I want to use minumum colour and distrations to make it as effective and communictive as possible. So what I now need to do is develop some more visuals and storyboarding so I can then re-start looking at the type and logo design, which didnt work as well and I really do understand why, in terms of colour and choice of type, it was to child like and not well designed for the approach I was going for.*  START MOVING THINGS:After a bit more visual developments and when I get the exact feel I want I will start taking things into after effects again and making giff that will help me develop movement, which is a significant element I want to focus on. * LOOK AT AUDIENCE AND CHANNELI need to start considering and working on idea and visuals that will hold up the show, which means that I need to do a lot of research into the appropriate channels and looking at how I will determine audiences.